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February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLS UPDATE SOON!!!Im a big sucker for the dark and possesive kind of Draco!!And Hermione's rage is just perfect with the kind of character Draco has..Its like they're the perfect example when ice and fire collide..im really lovin it..And the way Draco reacted when he found out about Blaise and Hermione was really awesome coz it showed that somehow..he really did want Mione ALL FOR HIMSELF...EXCLUSIVE...HIS ALONE..I dunno if its just me but being possesive really turns me on..same goes with your story and the final scenes of chap. 10..The "Are-you-mine?" part was...OOhhhh lalala...HOT..INTENSE...*Fans myself*...anyway..stop reading this review and get started!!hehe..Take Care!^_^
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February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so sorry for the late review!! Work and real life suck! but I love it!! I'm gald they made up... makes me happy... the the smut!! *drool* I love you!! That was just hot!!! Wow! Now I'm all hot and bothered!! Good Job... I can't wait to read more. And the grammar and emotion was... stunning!!!!
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February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait for a update! This is the only story I care about
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February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello m'dear! I said I'd review all chapters and I shall do so! Sorry for the long wait, I had to move a bunch of my crap upstate =P I hate moving/packing. Enough about me, onto you!
Chapter 2:
You are seriously, completely full of wit (not shit, WIT). I rilly like your Hermione. She is awesome! I love her little inner monologues, like, "Did Harry and Ron like each other more than friends?" and "Damn her above average intelligence!" I laughed really hard at the last one. I must be careful not to use it, as I like it so much.
I also think I should commission you to write all of my smexy scenes. I mean, your first kiss scene? Whoo! It's so drawn out and exact and perfect! if that was their first kiss, man...their sexy luvin' will be the experience all us girls ever wanted!
Okay, more on the next chapter!
Chapter 2:
You are seriously, completely full of wit (not shit, WIT). I rilly like your Hermione. She is awesome! I love her little inner monologues, like, "Did Harry and Ron like each other more than friends?" and "Damn her above average intelligence!" I laughed really hard at the last one. I must be careful not to use it, as I like it so much.
I also think I should commission you to write all of my smexy scenes. I mean, your first kiss scene? Whoo! It's so drawn out and exact and perfect! if that was their first kiss, man...their sexy luvin' will be the experience all us girls ever wanted!
Okay, more on the next chapter!
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February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3:
I don't know how useful my reviews are to you, as they're just a conglomerate of quotes (I heart quotes) and fangirly praise but I shall press on! The most perfect line? "It was no mystery that The Boy Who Had Too Many
I don't know how useful my reviews are to you, as they're just a conglomerate of quotes (I heart quotes) and fangirly praise but I shall press on! The most perfect line? "It was no mystery that The Boy Who Had Too Many
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February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4:
WHOOO! SO HAWT!!!! The best part, of course, was Draco saying "fuck!" in so many ways. The word is like a language on its own, don't you agree? You are a magician with your fingers (for...typing. I don't know what crazy things you do in the bed, woman!) I must...take notes!
Did I mention i love it when hermione goes on her frantic mind rambles?? Her questions become more and more profound and telling, in my opinion. Haha like, "Was Snape as callous as he seemed to be, or did he just need a really good hug?" haha I think he just needs a good hug but i don't think I should be the one to give it. I like living, thank you very much.
Also, I'm not sure if it's how you see it in your mind's eye, but in MY mind, whenever Draco goes off on his little 'contrast' ditties, I can SEE him kind of closing his eyes imperiously, with one hand in air, waxing profoundly about his innermost thoughts. I heart it.
WHOOO! SO HAWT!!!! The best part, of course, was Draco saying "fuck!" in so many ways. The word is like a language on its own, don't you agree? You are a magician with your fingers (for...typing. I don't know what crazy things you do in the bed, woman!) I must...take notes!
Did I mention i love it when hermione goes on her frantic mind rambles?? Her questions become more and more profound and telling, in my opinion. Haha like, "Was Snape as callous as he seemed to be, or did he just need a really good hug?" haha I think he just needs a good hug but i don't think I should be the one to give it. I like living, thank you very much.
Also, I'm not sure if it's how you see it in your mind's eye, but in MY mind, whenever Draco goes off on his little 'contrast' ditties, I can SEE him kind of closing his eyes imperiously, with one hand in air, waxing profoundly about his innermost thoughts. I heart it.
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February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, so brilliant, my author! Bravo! Those two are so dirty, so raw. Oh, why couldn't my high school days be more like theirs? Very sexy, not a wrong turn in sight =)
Haha good show with the Millicent bit. And I love your Blaise and Draco. They're so funny - you can never have enough mom jokes. And with Blaise's mom, you can't really go wrong, can you?
One pet peeve i have (NOT with your story, just in general) is when Draco gets all up in hermione's face, acting like he knows every bit of her, but when she turns the table, he suddenly gets RIDICULOUSLY angry and claims she doesn't know a damn thing about him. I know it's totally in character but it annoys me anyhow. Kudos to your Hermione taking him down a peg and telling him a what's what.
Haha good show with the Millicent bit. And I love your Blaise and Draco. They're so funny - you can never have enough mom jokes. And with Blaise's mom, you can't really go wrong, can you?
One pet peeve i have (NOT with your story, just in general) is when Draco gets all up in hermione's face, acting like he knows every bit of her, but when she turns the table, he suddenly gets RIDICULOUSLY angry and claims she doesn't know a damn thing about him. I know it's totally in character but it annoys me anyhow. Kudos to your Hermione taking him down a peg and telling him a what's what.
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February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh em gee. I usually pride myself on knowing exactly where the twists and turns go in most fanfics (not due to my intelligence but due to my VAST geekiness and reading tons of fics for years), so I was thinking, okay, she either lost her virginity to Ron (in an awkward but sweet kind of way) or some unknown muggle boy she knew during the holidays.
BLAM! BLAISE? W00t your mind is a twisted little thing, ain't it ^___^
Your smut scenes are effing hot, if I may say so. Also, one of the main reasons I ship DR/HR is because of their hot, dirty luvin. I mean, I will never get tired of Draco whispering dirty things in her ear. I mean, I can't really imagine Harry or Ron whispering dirty, smexy things to anybody. It's just kind of...odd. SO yes, you are on a roll and I can't wait for the next chapter!
BLAM! BLAISE? W00t your mind is a twisted little thing, ain't it ^___^
Your smut scenes are effing hot, if I may say so. Also, one of the main reasons I ship DR/HR is because of their hot, dirty luvin. I mean, I will never get tired of Draco whispering dirty things in her ear. I mean, I can't really imagine Harry or Ron whispering dirty, smexy things to anybody. It's just kind of...odd. SO yes, you are on a roll and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7:
OooOOh girl, u know what mama likes! I am completely gaga for your blaise/draco interactions! I love how they're friends and yet there's this strain underneath it all. Yum yum yum! fav quote this chappie, "And how many times did you fuck her?" I know it's not the most imaginative of sentences but something about it was so raw and telling, i can't help but love it! And who doesn't love two guys fighting over a girl? Cmon now!
I can't wait for blaise to be more fleshed out in future chapters. I hope he's as smooth and mysterious as I think he should be. I LIKE him aggressive.
OooOOh girl, u know what mama likes! I am completely gaga for your blaise/draco interactions! I love how they're friends and yet there's this strain underneath it all. Yum yum yum! fav quote this chappie, "And how many times did you fuck her?" I know it's not the most imaginative of sentences but something about it was so raw and telling, i can't help but love it! And who doesn't love two guys fighting over a girl? Cmon now!
I can't wait for blaise to be more fleshed out in future chapters. I hope he's as smooth and mysterious as I think he should be. I LIKE him aggressive.
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February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH BLAISE, take me now! Your take on his is purrrrrfect! If I were Hermione, I'd completely try to do both of them as often as possible until I finally get caught. Oh, why must society not smile down upon threesomes? Can't you see Hermione shouldn't refuse either sexy man????
Blaise whispering their past to her - my my, hermione has got some nerves of steel not to melt into a goo!
I must quickly get to the next chapter!
Blaise whispering their past to her - my my, hermione has got some nerves of steel not to melt into a goo!
I must quickly get to the next chapter!