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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the second chapter. The paragraph in the first chapter where he refers to his eyes as penetrating and calls himself a Slytherin Sex God really bugs me though. Maybe that could be toned down a little? A little less cliche-y?
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my lord!
nice cliffy to throw in there...keep up the good work!
nice cliffy to throw in there...keep up the good work!
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More! Please, pretty please? *wibbles* I'm sorry I don't have anything more constructive to say, as all I can think at the moment is MORE PLEASE. But in a much more respectful and polite manner.
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*laughs and falls over* ohh good gods that was great! btw the GE archive is back up so you can update again *winks* I think my favourite part of that chapter was of course Harry walking in on them almost shagging *snickers* poor old potter
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Shit!!! thats what I basicly exclaimed when I read the ending of ch. 11. Man this story is totally hot I can't wait for what happens next.
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, It's just like Harry to check on her because of that migrane! I can't wait to read the reaction! I hope she's not in love with Harry!
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wicked. Just plain wicked!!!
I love your story!! How much drama can one endure..haha.
I'll be watching for your next chapter. UPDATE SOON, for everyone's mental health.
DJ
I love your story!! How much drama can one endure..haha.
I'll be watching for your next chapter. UPDATE SOON, for everyone's mental health.
DJ
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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ha-ha! But how did Harry get in? Hilarious. Can't wait for the explanations!
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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!!!KLA;DFJADF
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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh now that is just a fucking brilliant ending to the chapter.