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by TomFeltonIsKindaHot

person naughtyslytherinx3
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww. i loved the very last part where he tells her she will always be his and she says "i know". XD ahdorable.
person Adelaide
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the break up scene. I think u had just the right amount of 'fireworks.'
person kate
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
excellent story!! keep it up!
person sdank
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm always excited to see what is going to happen next because unlike other stories... I never know what's coming next in this story and I love that. Keep up the good work, can't wait for your next update!
person ladiea
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey there!

I followed up with this story for a while now and everytime I felt guilty not leaving a review. So here goes:

Since I'm at Chp13, I like the full circle of events. The beginning at the end. I know its not the end, but I still think it's good. The character of Draco is really good. He's complex but simple at the same time. Exactly how I see him, at times. I also like the title/plot you chose. It's interesting to read Draco's contrasts.

Now, although I think Draco was well done, I'm not so sure about Hermione. Don't get me wrong, you have me hooked to the story, but Hermione isn't how I would picture her. A more cautious person. I also would never expect her to be with anyone other than Draco but hey, it's your story and its fanon, we can't go wrong.

Keep up the great work and don't let your boyfriend or anyone else tell you other wise. lol
person tootie
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am never disappointed with your chapters. I have a feeling some sort of fireworks are heading our way. Continue on, please!!
person Maegan
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story =love.

I am completely hooked. You write tremendously well and i am extremely impressed and entralled with 'Contrast'. You portray both characters exactly as I imagined they would act and the plot is simply delicious. Please update soon, i am dying to know what happens next!
person JaynaM
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH NO!! COME BACK!! COME BACK!! more more more MORE!!

Jayna
xxx
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, technically, u did write "The End" in your author's note. But I will forgive you.
I will not, however forgive you if you don't write more soon. VERY SOON! This story has captivated my attention from the first time I saw it posted.

DM/HG 4-Ever!
-Gwyn
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey hey hey... I'm sorry I seem to have come off as rude. I really like this story, and I have been waiting anxiously to see what happens next. The Snape question was more of me "thinking out loud" than anything; I just thought that even Snape would have had a slap on the wrist for Draco, even though it would most certainly be less severe than Hermione's punishment. As for the little jibes at fanfiction cliches, they are kind of funny, and they're all the same things that annoy me, but they just seem a little out of place. They kind of take the reader away from the story for a second. I'm sorry I didn't state my comments better, I didn't intend to make you feel defensive. Again, I really think this is one of the better Hermione/Draco stories out there, and you've done well to avoid the cliches.