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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow!!! that is all that comes to my mind. this chapter was definitly a great turning point and not just for hermoine.
i usually like to give out constructive criticism, but i have none. this was truly a wonderful chapter.
i usually like to give out constructive criticism, but i have none. this was truly a wonderful chapter.
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... i can feel something brewing!! great chappie (i had to scroll down; i just couldn't read hermione hooking up with blaise) but nonetheless amazing. How many chapters are you planning on writing?
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March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
roberta i was about to start crying, :'( i want more more more more more. Fab story by the way, i can't remember if I reviewed it before, but it really is gorgeous. like draco that is ;)
ophelia
ophelia
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March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! i love this! :D Im glad its not the end though :) Keep up the fantastic work! for all our sakes! <3 Vixen x
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March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
second best chapter ever!!!!! :D first is of course sex on McGonagalls desk *grins* hrmm favourite parts.. shout out to me of course LOL erm.. Blaise seducing Hermione and her walking into the suit of armour :D
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March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
need more
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March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i've been reading your story for a long time
and i love it
it's probably my favorite story on the sight
and the way you write the characters, it's just
so.... real
and i loved this addition with blaise.
i think they needed a rematch just so she could
see that she only needs malfoy
cant wait for the next update
and i love it
it's probably my favorite story on the sight
and the way you write the characters, it's just
so.... real
and i loved this addition with blaise.
i think they needed a rematch just so she could
see that she only needs malfoy
cant wait for the next update
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter and i loved the break up scene. for once someone wrote a break up chapter without "blow up in your face" drama or in other words they exaggerate. i thought it suit these two characters very well, good job. and i love your dialogue between the main characters, except the fight between malfoy and zabini. but i totally understand why you placed that scene. overall great job and i can't wait to read more.
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
luved it so much, keep updating okay. this was your best chapter especially at the end. I was so lose to tears, i can't believe they broke it off.
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you are updating! I see this at the top! I hope hop hope hope I love this story !!