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Jesus! that was absolutely unbelievable, i didn't expect that chapter to be anything like that i thought it would take longer for it all to come to blows, i think that chapter 15 was absolutely fantastic, there was no way you could of made it any better and i was gutted to finish it because i just wanted to read on. I loved Dracos speach and please don't keep me in suspence about what happens next! I love contrast!!! love soph xxx

poor draco i feel for him. hope u update soon, i wanna know what happens

there were quite a few spelling and grammatical errors in Chapter 15, but the story is still quite good.

I ADORE this story!! I cannot tell you how much I love it because that in itself would constitute a story! I love the way you write the characters! Draco has never been out of his zone, no matter how Hermione effects him, he is always a Malfoy despite the emotions tearing him apart. THAT takes skill!! Especially in writing fanfiction because people have a horrible habit of making Draco soft or hero-like or whatever they want. I even admit I suck at keeping Draco in character!

Even more I love the chemistry you build and the tension between the characters. You can almost taste it like they were right in front of you. You have a gift!!

I also gotta say when it comes to writing intimate scenes you've got it made!! You've got the mix right. You've got it perfect!! You've got the swearing, sex, vulgar and kinky all down so it's readable without being unbelievable or overdone.!!!!

You rock!!! Keep writing!! I adore you!!

definitely best chapter so far *grins* you are a talent I tell you lol well done and I can't wait for the next one :D

Loved it! It's so frustrating waiting for Draco to figure out that he loves her, but I bet it'll be worth it.

Oh, definitely liked it...especially that he couldn't go all the way with those other girls...but oh, Hermione...Blaise of all people. Of course we already knew that ;)

I don't really think I can go better than amazing at the moment, but I loved the harry/draco interaction and the fight was fabulous... I can't wait till it completely dawns on ron.

My dear, I'm not sure if it's because this chapter was longer than the previous, or because it offered more catharsis, but I was more enthralled in here than ever before. By the way, Hermione's side note to Ron and Harry made me laugh so hard I spit my beer out.

I love Draco's passion that you've drawn out for us. Screw Hermione - if this whole story was written from Draco's point of view, I would be such a happy reader. I love this fic and you've done well bringing it to this point. I'm curious as to your wrap-up so I'm still a reader you're trailing along. :)

I love it! I felt sorry for Draco. It was her choice and she blames him for trying to move on (even if he can't) I really hope Harry sees how much Draco loves her.