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April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is really really good. i cant wait for you to update...its just awesome ^_^
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am sooo freaking mad at you. If there is something I hate it is betrayal, and you have had so much of it in this god forsaken, brilliant, amazing, well written, cry making story. Do you know I was pissed of enough to cry because they did not tell her. I hate it, cuz she has been with them from the beginning and they should know her well enough to trust her with something like this. I got completely absorbed by your story and I read all the chapters in one sitting and it is very late at night here in Sweden, which is why I probably will be rereading the last couple of chapters, but so far so good, and please, please, please, make them get back together and have a happy ending.
I am sorry for rambling on a bit but over all this is a really good story, just remember to do what is best for the story because at this point you could go either way. either you have one or two (possibly 3-5) more plot twists and then end it in a way you like or you will have ten more twists which will be about 20-40 more chapters and become utterly horrendous.
Once again, I love this story and the passion between Mione and Draco, keep on writing the same way, or improve, whatever tickles your pear.
All the way from Sweden, Madeleine
PS. I apologise if i offended you in any way, i just usually write whatever comes to mind at the time of the review, but i never meant to.
I am sorry for rambling on a bit but over all this is a really good story, just remember to do what is best for the story because at this point you could go either way. either you have one or two (possibly 3-5) more plot twists and then end it in a way you like or you will have ten more twists which will be about 20-40 more chapters and become utterly horrendous.
Once again, I love this story and the passion between Mione and Draco, keep on writing the same way, or improve, whatever tickles your pear.
All the way from Sweden, Madeleine
PS. I apologise if i offended you in any way, i just usually write whatever comes to mind at the time of the review, but i never meant to.
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April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter.
Loved all the emotions.
Interesting ways for the trio to reduce their stress.
Did Ron && Harry have a quickie in the shower before they went to the library ?
I can't wait for Hermione to break && get back together with Draco.
It's so obvious it'll happen which is what I like.
Your chapters just seem to get better && better.
You are truly an amazing writer.
Please update soon,
I'm dying for more.
Much Love...
XXX
Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX
Loved all the emotions.
Interesting ways for the trio to reduce their stress.
Did Ron && Harry have a quickie in the shower before they went to the library ?
I can't wait for Hermione to break && get back together with Draco.
It's so obvious it'll happen which is what I like.
Your chapters just seem to get better && better.
You are truly an amazing writer.
Please update soon,
I'm dying for more.
Much Love...
XXX
Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX
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April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another fantasmic chapter. Yeah, I'd be pissed as fuck as well. We'll see how long she can keep up with that whole detached, not caring thing.
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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahh! its so good. i absolutely love your story, and you have are a really good writer, there's not sudden action thats unexplainable or plot holes, or ridiculious banter that i can't follow. and its not really cliche. so i love it, and i wait and wait for you to update. ugh. i hate waiting for updates, i should just start reading complete stories...but i hate it when stories end...boo...
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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hiya,
WOW!! that was a bitchin' chappie!!! loved the Boggart and hope it plays a fun bit later on. My only critic is a small spelling booboo...Cruse instead of Curse. Its the same all through the chapter ( I spell "the" as teh ALL the time...my fingers just go that way!
Sky
WOW!! that was a bitchin' chappie!!! loved the Boggart and hope it plays a fun bit later on. My only critic is a small spelling booboo...Cruse instead of Curse. Its the same all through the chapter ( I spell "the" as teh ALL the time...my fingers just go that way!
Sky
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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked how you worked in HBP details into the plot; and how Hermione reacted!
Good chapter.
Good chapter.
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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! So happy for the update. I can't wait to see Draco and Hermione interact (no, not another word for sex!) again!
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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whoa, After the first paragraph or so I actually had to double check that I had clicked on the right story....But I like this new direction. I kind of wish that Hermione had been harder on Draco, but I also get why you had her not talk to him at all....well, think the way this story is turning shows a lot of promise. Please keep it up, even if it takes you a bit of time for each chapter. I'm excited to see what will happen, as well as for the (I'm sure not only hopefully) return of lemons.
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March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
just read 8. you should really be tired of me by now...just for the record. your characterization of Blaise makes me want to punch him in the face. I'm glad hermione decided to tell Malfoy...if nothing but to avoid any future wrath...