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by TomFeltonIsKindaHot

schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for updating, lol.

I checked everyday (exept last week cuz i was away), yeah this chapter was, erm, very good, descriptive. thanks!!!

keep em coming!
person Yanafava
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sweet!!! Can't wait to see what Draco does next!
person Jennie
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* That girl has my name!! And she took what i wanted to say O_O!
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay now, seriously, I've been patient but you've got to update. I need to know what Draco thinks of Hermione's new body. Pleeeaaasseee. Take your time to make it right, of course, but seriously, update.
person Jennie
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohh! >__< I'm looking at this at least once everyday, and I'm almost crying when I see it hasn't been updated XD
I really do love your story, and I can't wait for the next chapter :) Keep up the good work :'D
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story and spent hours catching up. I love it- it's wonderful. I did HATE Blaise and Hermione sex after she and Draco broke up, especially after Draco didn't have sex with anyone else, but I'll just ignore that chapter and move on. :) Other than that, I love the plot, the characterizations, everything and can't wait until you update again! Hurry back!!
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've just finished first chapter, and I like the story sofare... Looking forward to the next 15 chapters... ^_^
You are a very good writer!
person Jess
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! Keep up the great work, can't wait to be reading more of this great fic.

Jess
person molly
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sure everyone's told you this, but this is an amazing story! Like, really. Every now and again I'll come across a book that I just can't put down because it's that good, and I have been reading this story for the past couple hours. It's just so weird seeing someone who isn' J.K. writing in the same way but twisting it around so that it's not all about Harry. Personally, I love Hermione, she's my favorite character, and I think do you an exceptionally good job portraying her. I can hear what she's saying in my head, and Malfoy. The story is very well written, and the dialouge is just as amazing. You have to keep writing. For the world's sake, because we need more people who can truly write like this, who can write perfect parts for characters that didn't come from her own mind.

Love much much,
Molly
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man, I am so glad this is finally up! "Did they get Arts & Crafts time?" I love the nervous habit you've given her. Don't take this as a criticism, because I understand its importance to the story, but Harry bothers me. Why should it be any business of his who Hermione shags? Not as if he or Ron waited for her permission. I keep waiting for her to tell Harry off for ever telling her she had to choose between him and Draco. If it happens, it'll be a real awakening for them both... Now, as a writer myself, I know how much everyone hates this particular advice, but it's true nonetheless: you really need a better beta, assuming you use one. I really like this story, but the errors are distracting. I hope I haven't tripped over my words and upset you again, because I truly LOVE reading this.