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by TomFeltonIsKindaHot

person pickles87
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow amazing story.
waiting for more.

Hopefully they will wake before the duo. Somehow I doubt it though. I have a feeling they will get caught. Maybe Prof Snape will be the one. He would definitely be alot easier on the couple then the boys. especially if all three have to do battle like they just did and I don't think Malfoy would stand a chance.
person Rainbow Muffin
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I still think it's AWESOME!! Although it's angsty, there are a few subtle hints which indicate that it might not end with Hermione and Draco going separate ways and such. And nobody I luv has died, so im happy!!
person Britt
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a powerful chapter. I'll admit that you lost me there for a while, what with mild OOCness here and there, but you've got me hooked once again!!!!
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another awesomely fantastic chapter. I LOVE this story; everything about it, so if its off fro mwhat you had planned, its still great, though im sure that your plans were just as great.
person Nicole
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent writing as always! Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Mookie
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your formatting got screwed up. The apostrophes, quotations marks, and your punctuation got replaced with funky characters. Probably got screwed up when you uploaded, I hate when AFF does that >.<


Oh! But great chapter. I've been waiting so long for an update. I can't wait to find out who's the leak and who will be making an appearance (though I have a hunch about the latter ~_^)

Can't wait for the next update ^^
person Anon
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
FANTASTIC!

You said the fic has changed direction from what you originally intended (or you didn't foresee this). I'll be honest and say I've noticed the shift, but I haven't minded because the story continues to be engaging and entertaining. It's not a bad thing because the way things have gone are good. I eagerly await your next update and would definitely be interested in reading any other fics you start once this one is finished!!! But take as long as you want with this one. I want you to keep writing Draco/Hermione!
person jaycee
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter...umm the only thing is that it got a little funky when formatted? Maybe check into that and repost because it was kinda hard to read...other than that fantastic as always!
person livelifelovehgdm
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
She's growing on him! I love it! You hadn't updated in a while and I was very depressed! But I loved this chapter! YAY!!! thanks! you made my day

geo
person Fia
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Firstly, great chapter, i think it showed a lot about dracos personality and how he feels for hermione, and i must admit it was a long wait but it was well worth it! I can't wait for the next chapter i have a few theories on who the 'betrayer' might be so i'll just have to wait and see if my suspicions are right, and you mentioned a return of an old friend, neville perhaps? or maybe luna. I think your story has turned a completely different direction to what you started out as, as i have been reading since chapter one, but to be honest i don't think it was ever meant to be short and sweet, i think their are so many possibilities and you have embraced them all making it most probably the best written story on adult fiction yet.
Love you and your story to bits xxx