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Yay!!! Update more!!!

Great! I spent all day reading it! I cant wait for more, your have a talent. I read a LOT of fanfiction, and it isn't everyday I find one I really like. The plot is interesting, and the characterization of Draco is exactly how I see him...well maybe not exactly, but damn close! When someone portrays him as anything other than a prejudice prat, it has to be done with style, and you got it! And not everyone does...
As for Hermione, she is different, but you transitioned her, which I like, so the readers can become accustomed with the new her. She is still the same, but older. The only thing I'm iffy on is the gay Harry thing. Not so hot about that, but hey, it's your story, and I like it anyway. I love it, cant wait for the rest. And I dont say that often! Good work!

I know I am reviewing late in the game, but this is by far one of the best fan fics I have ever read, and trust me, I have been around the block. You have made me fall in love with Draco and Hermione as a pairing, for their passion and pure kinkiness!!!

PLEASE update soon, and thank you for sharing this work with all.

chapter 19 is unreadable. Contact technical support.

Hermione has changed completely. Snape's the snitch, inn'e? As for an old friend... Blaise, right?

So I just finished chapter 2... I guess I am a little behind on the times but I just found your story and I love it sofar. And I loved the term 'rabid review whore' it's too funny, I wish I could steal it lol. Anywhoo I think you are a really good writer and I can't wait to finish this story when I have more time, since it looks really long, which is a good thing! I'll review again when I finish and tell you what I think, even though I already know it is going to be really great. Until next time : )

I have been reading your story obsessively for the past few hours and I just finished chapter 16. I have to say, I'm kind of disappointed that Hermione didn't stay mad at Harry and Ron for a longer amount of time. When she was screaming at them I was cheering and feeling like "you go girl! tell them how much they suck!" but then it just wound down so fast and she was forgiving them. Anger doesn't work that way. You don't just forgive someone because they forgave you a long time ago. Harry had made her choose. That was cruel. It was needed, but it wasn't exactly...I dunno what I'm trying to say. Haha. I just feel that she shouldn't have forgiven them so fast. There was all this out of control energy and I feel that they just really needed to feel her wrath. About everything that had happened. And the fact that she just let it go b/c of what Harry said about her relationship w/ Malfoy and how they got over it was...extremely annoying. Because he only got over it because she broke it off with Malfoy. Because of Harry. And I was okay that they broke it off. I'm just annoyed that more anger wasn't directed at Harry, even if it was later on for a different reason. And I know I haven't finished it up to where you've written right now but that ending for chapter 16 was really kind of disappointing and I wanted to say something about it. Please realize that I'm just expressing my opinion and if I didn't love your story so much I wouldn't be bothered with writing anything. I really really love it. This is definently going to be my other favorite HG/DM story. You're amazing. :)

to tell you the truth, i love the turn of events from when the story started.
i am so happy that you updated. for a sec, i thought you discontinued it.
however, great chapter. i really love draco and hermione's characters in your story.
they fit so well together.

well i can't wait for the next update!

Great update! I loved the scenes and then what happened later...Oh, I hope Hermione is the one to figure out who the spy is!

Great well written story.
Love the humor and sweetness,
thanks,
R