rate_review Reviews

Love your fic and how it's evolving! I've not anything useful to contribute review wise except to say I really like where it's come from and where it's at now and that I keep an eye out for when you do update!

I think this story is brilliant. I love the flow of it, the dialogues and the d/hr moments. The story does get better by each chapter and makes me wanting more. I'm having trouble getting interested with the latest d/hr stories nowadays because of the neverending cliches and unrealistic plotlines and I'm glad that you don't seem to plan to do that anytime soon. And I really hope that you update frequently and complete this story, this is a good d/hr fic and I'll be depressed if it ends up negletected somewhere down the road(like most of the great fanfictions out there).

Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep it up!

Hmmmmmmmmm where do i start off... well lets just say that im a smarmy lazy *old* 18 yr *young* person who reads fics (instead of studyin for A level exams) like im in my mid forties,married for 20 years, and not gettin any from my husband(which i dont intend on getting till I have like zillions of dollars and completed my goal of world domination) but thats besideds the point! My point is that ive been reading fics on this site for about 2yrs now ( that doesnt say much about my upholding the law seeing as im 18... and i guess u can do the math)ne wayz this is the first fic that i have even bothered to sign up for just so i can review, arent you just BRILLIANT? I think that your lucky there are no screws loose in my head because then i would kidnap you and have you in a small musky room writting fics for me forever and ever and ever Muahahahahahahahaha!!!


P.S. Great Story really!!

A good chapter, but the coding problems were distracting....you might want to take a look at it. :D

Hey dats me ^^^ up there didnt put my namey thingy just thought id put it this time cuz there are so many Anons!! ne ways YOUR STORY IZZ BRILLIANT... WOOOOOOOOO!!

Amazingg new chapter,
I'm so happyy Ron && Harry are okay.
I have a feeling who the snitch may be,
But it's probably completely wrong,
It always is.
I agree your story has evolved,
But as far as I can tell,
It's quite a good thing.
I love lots of angst in a fic,
Especially when it's a Hermione/Draco one.
I just get so irritated with those stories with the same pairing,
Having the couple sleep together then all of a sudden they're madly in love && all lovey dovey,
That is not how it should be.
You have an amazing story here && I just know it will keep getting better.
One thing,
We haven't heard a contrast from Draco in a while,
Perhaps it calls for another one soon ?
I miss them.
I also have no clue who could be making a reappearance,
I suppose if I looked through the story I might,
But I'm just too lazy to.
Please,
Update soon,
I REALLYY want to know what's going to happen next !

Much Love...
XXX
Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX

P.S. This new chapter was well worth the wait, deffinatelyy !

So, they hate each other? Draco claims Hermione has his, gets intensely jealous when he feels someone's going take her away, notices all her habits, AND he's always thinking about her to the point of dementia, yet he still doesn't love our girl Hermione???

I need closure! Next chappy please! Do they really hate each other??

By the way, I love this story. I also find the length of all the chapters to be very satisfying. Thank you!

i love your style of writting, Its real and well developed. I'm waiting on the edge of my seat for your next update.

That was very awesome! This part...

She saw his lips curve into a smile and then he did something that almost made her knees give out and caused her breath to become labored. He stuck out his tongue and she saw the remnants of what looked like a lemon drop.

i just read your entire fic. dude, i love the smuttiness. you're really good. dont know if it's coz i stopped reading for a while.. but anyway, although you said that your story's headed in a different direction from where you started, i think it's a perfect place to be headed. at least, it's not all focused on a love story and you keep us, on our toes:D begging for more. haha. oh, btw, there's something weird in the last chapter. not the story, the text. i dont know if that's just on my pc, but like he quotations " " are kinda' fucked. i really like your plot and the way you wrote it. oh, and i love the way Draco's never out of character. like he hasnt gone soft yet. hope to read more:D