rate_review Reviews

my god i love your writing...... please update soon, i really must know who gets slapped first- zabini for, well, being zabini or harry for bringing zabini into the equation....

nooooooooooooooooo!!!
how could you..you are evil!
i LOVE youre story..
hurry hurry hurry!

FINALLY!!! Not only am I no longer in danger of death from lack of Contrast, but Hermione's about to sucker-punch Harry, which I've been waiting for all along! Hooray! Poncy asshat, acting like Hermione's owner or some shit. How did he pull Blaise out of thin air like that? Is he so intent on controlling Hermione that he'd induct some shady Slytherin and risk all their lives? Prick. And that scene in the corner is going to keep me awake tonight, I tell you that. Hot. I can't wait to see what's up next!
PS: Fire your beta. Anyone who uses apostrophes to pluralize needs to go back to the fouth grade.

You have no idea for how long I've been avoiding your story. The 'lemon' in the summary was the reason.

Before I start, please excuse my English.

Today, I opened it and read the whole thing.So, let me just say I love you for creating it.
Your fic is beautiful, I love the style and the dialouges and the hints of humor.
I love the smut and the never ceasing intensity of it. I congratulate you for keeping it hot through twenty chapters.

my private little wish, if I may?
Push/pull realtionship is probably the most likely kind Draco and Hermione would have, but please, don't push them any more,and please, don't let Blaise back into game, because the second time was more than enough. How Draco got passed that beats me.

Hope to read from you soon....

jesus, how long are you going to wait before posting a new chapter???? It's driving me crazy!

all i have to say is WHOA!!

Sweet banana nuts! That was the steamiest chapter I have read in a while! Excellent writing and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh sweet Merlin! What a cliffhanger!! The chapter was wonderful, as always. Can't wait to see Draco freak out! Should be entertaining.

you know, i really don't think harry was easy on her. in fact, i would say he was being a selfish ass, asking her to choose between her friends and some meaningless shag. granted, his reaction would be more objectionable if she were in love with draco, but nonetheless he doesn't have the right. i do think the irrationality is in character, as is hermione's overwhelming and unecessary guilt. i don't like the interaction o a personal level, but it is well done and fits perfectly. that isn't a criticism, we can't always like characters, even when we sympathise with them. and harry is so gay.

I would just like to say that this is probably one of the best stories I've ever read. I love it and I really hope you continue to write chapters because I definately enjoy reading them.