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by TomFeltonIsKindaHot

schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG...finished what you have so far...you're so nasty!!! I love your writing style..it's so damn erotic...great story...I hope you won some awards, you definitely deserved the nominations...looking forward to the next chapter : )
person Saharah
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW
Just when I think I'm making sense of this world again... you end on a cliffhanger like THAT.
Oh, and brilliant way for Hermione to stand up to them. I usually would say 'oh, not realistic'... but shit. The stuff they said? I'd have thrown Malfoy down right in front of them too! Excellent writing.
Loved it. :)
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Im not sure it depens on how long I have to wait for chapter 22............... Only joking no this story has my vote as well as Not so Silnico and water. I decided I had to get it down to three and if you all get to the final then Im not voteing cus I just cant decide betwwen the three.

Good luck my fingers are crossed for you
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow..half way through now..this story is damned good...how did I miss it? how'd I miss it? lol
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OK, the end of Chapter 10 is OFF THE CHAIN!!!! That's the most erotic, violent, passionate, and domineering sex between Draco and Hermione I've seen...and it's so fucking hot!! Thanks for that!
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, I just finished reading through ch 21. It's amazing, really. I can't believe though that there's 21 chapters and they still haven't realized they're in love! That's a little much?!?! I can't wait to hear about it! UPDATE!
person Nawdz
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn. Damn. Damn.
Great Chap! Really. Its about time for Hermione to stand up and freaking yell at Harry for being a over protective buffoon.
The scene was hot and funny. I swear I was laughing my as off while reading the lines.
But on Draco's new thing for Voldie, what would he do. Well, he also did say that he's not going to hurt or dear Hermione right?
Draco needs to get his loyalty straight. Perhaps a getaway? or a finally revealing of being a spy?
Surely you won't take long to update right? But even if you do, I bet its all worth it. :]
Nawdz
person Boo
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant chapter. Suddenly realised I hadn't finished it. Can't wait for the next one :)
person Taylor
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the last chapter was great i hope you can post more soon!
person Stag
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHOA. You can't leave it like this!!! Are they finally in a relationship?? Does he admit he loves her? Does she admit she loves him? I'm frustrated now.