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for Happily ever after

by Leenah

person jassy-mar
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story well all of them but it would be cool to make it multi chaptered just dont put so much detail that it bores everyone to death you seem good at not putting to much or to little so im not worried about it but anywas until next time
person tori
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i think you should make several detailed chapters but you shouldn,t post a ne story for each make WIP.
anyay i ike your story alot.
person lietothedevil
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it's sweet. fills me up with innocent happiness for a while. you should definitely put up the rest.
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more detail is always best!
person prettydelial
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think this is a realy sweet story and I like how slow it is because then that means I will have more to read :)
person Crystal Malfoy
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it!! About your question I really don't know... Which u feel mroe comfortable with =P

Harry and Draco are sooo cute!!! And well Ron and Hermione are cute too!

Update soon =)
person Vittani
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have to update this, its so sweet, Definitely need more. please please please please update it soon.
person Jojo
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the detailed chapters, so keep going with that!
person woof
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Details are GOOD as long as you don't get bogged down! Gentle development is always better than giving the reader whiplash!
person Anna Belle
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man, I've been waiting for this for a long time. I like the pace it's going now but i wish the chapters were a bit longer though. Keep up the good work.