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for Stolen Innocence

by xsexxandxcandyx

person Sara
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've been following this fic religiously. Update soon, i've been more than content with each chapter you have written.
Looking forward to your next update!
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im glad he could help in some small way ... and was able to get a laught out of her .. please update soon ... later for now

angel
person kel
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow this is a really really really good story
Can u please update soon

luv kel
person nat
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is great so far, u are a truly gifted writer......please update
person alick
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well thanks i relly like this one amazing
person Kay_Rage
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love the playfulness.that chapter was kinda short tho.i cant wait to see what happens with ron.
person Tjay
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter wasn't off at all. What I'd like to know is how you get the characters so dead on... it's kinda scary how real and bang on they are... but I love the chapter! Good Job!
person lixxle
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting idea. To make the story easier to read, you NEED to fix the spacing problems. A space comes after commas, and periods. ALWAYS. Otherwise its difficult to read. So PLEASE fix it.
person pickles87
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Glad to be of help.

Good chapter. Its ashame that Ron will be an idiot about everything. Wish she would tell Harry the truth. But if you go by the books it seems he sides with Ron anyways.

Well better do some laundry or Hubby won't be going to his meeting...

Idea....
Snape has a potion that will make Ron admit what a git he is but Malfoy has to use the blood from his clothes to work the potion. Since Hermione is Ron's victim she is the one that has to brew it...
Hope that helps.
person alick
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well thank you but im thinking of striping it any way im at a block ill let you know my decision well this one was good, good luck with every thing when it comes to the surgery