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Aww Draco and Hermione were being so cute at the beginning of this chapter!! Of course it is D&H so obviously they had to go and screw it up, but that is why we love them :) Can't wait until the next chapter, and for Ron to get his ass kicked, muahaha.

I love your story. It is kind of over the top at times. And at other times it seems to not quite reach the top. I think you should work on your emotions. I know what I am suposed to be feeling when I read your story dear. But, I feel mostly like I want to create more drama just because I see where there can be more to create. All in all though, I love reading this story and I look for new updates every day. I am sorry I haven't revieved before now but I am new to the site and just now found the link. Please bring in more Ron/Hermione action if it fits your story layout. I would really like to see more of Hermione gaining confidence against Ron. As to what Ron does about that...I'll leave that up to you.
Happy writings dear,
moi

No. . . I want to finish it. . . I started it all today and can't wait for the next chapter. .. so cruel. . . lol. . . Good, actually great story, don't change a thing. . . expect to write more. Surprisingly this is the first D/H story I ever read. . . I love them now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this has been driving me mental

there is no 'e' in stomach

I love this story! The plot is beautiful, I've never really read one as well written as this. So much fluff, makes me feel all warm inside. <3

I am still in the process of reading, but I wanted to let you know that so far, I think this story is great! I like the detail, and how I can feel the character's emotions. Great work! And now, I'll continue my reading!

so i finally got around to getting caught up with this story... i really like it alot. I'm so glad harry finally came to his senses. Will Ron's actions couse his true nature to be seen?

oh i am so excited ffor your next update!

I just finished reading all 22 chapters and it was, simply put, amazing.
You have a few grammer and spelling errors here and there but nothing major.
I like how you made Hermione and Draco friends instead of just straight lovers, even though it is posted on an adult site.

Hi

I really like this story but in the last couple of chapters I noticed some mistakes in grammar and spelling e.g. you kept writing 'him' instead of 'her' in chapter 23

But apart from that I really like this story so well done and I can't wait to read more, so please UPDATE!

Love TiffANY : )

I love this fic SO much... but when does Hermione get it together and figure out that she loves Draco?

CetteFille