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for Stolen Innocence

by xsexxandxcandyx

person Cheile
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
pretty good! a little suggestion--make sure to run your spell and grammar checker before posting; i see a handful of misspelled words in there. but i like the premise of Ron not being "good". hoping to see more soon!
person luvhp
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah another update.
Eek, sorry to hear RL sucks at the moment {{hugs}}
Let your feelings out in your wirting, bash Ron if you like, LOL
Hoping things get better for you.
50 pages, wow, well, I'm here for the long haul! Keep up the great work! (And your chin) :)
person kmplease
schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
noooo, please update soon!! that was so unfair, to leave us like that!! so, whats going to happen between draco and pansy, what is hermione going to think about itf? are draco and pansy going to kiss and hermione catches them?? love this story, please update soon!!
schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I almost didn't realize you'd updated! Please don't let Draco and Pansy hook up! I do love all the fighting between D&H though, it just makes it oh so much better when they will finally make up. I can't wait to see what happens next!! Will Hermione walk in on the other two? I sense some serious confrontation in the making... yay!
person Extraho
schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i know all about reviews and motivation, trust me on that one. so what's going to happen now. wil moine apologise, walk in on /Draco ans pansy in the act or something? please hurry!!!
person pickles87
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
will she pass out?
i'm sorry about your break up.
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this abusive Ron line of storytelling...everyone always makes him so sweet and goofy...hopefully Draco will save the day : )
person luvhp
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, please udpate soon. I love this story!
person luvhp
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Congrats ont he new joba nd Good Luck with that. Hopefully you won't forget about us needy ficpeople over here.
Very good chapter. I like how Hermione realizes there's more to her feelings for Draco. Hopefully there will be some Hermione/Draco lovin' soon.
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG Thank you thank you for updating!!! I thought this story would never resume. It is a beautiful story and very credible. Once or twice I have cried or been close to tears because the way you describe abuse and its repercussions is so real. I scarily experience vicarious trauma.