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man.. i hope some helps her out soon .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel

I'm LOVING this story so far! I've never read a story where Ron was abusive. It's so interesting! I hope Draco will save her from Ron; (I don't like him) that would be so sweet! Please update soon. I have to know what's going to happen. How's Ron gonna react once they're alone?

This is an intriguing story, that is generally well written. However, and this may just be me being too uptight, it really annoys me that there is no space after the commas and periods. Please don't consider this to be a negative comment, as I believe this to be a worthy story and I do look forward to seeing more of this story and more from you. Take care and happy writing.

2 chapters in one night YAY!!!!!!!!!!! What is Ron going to do now, he is not going to have as much access to Hermione?? And Malfoy he is really being a stuid git right now

Hey love this chapter, can Draco see through her glamer? Hope to read more soon!
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Emma