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for Stolen Innocence

by xsexxandxcandyx

person Lisa
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DUUUUUUUUUDE
Awesome story Kayy!!!!!!
Add more chapters NOW! lol
I'm sorry I didnt reveiw when I read the first chappie, I kinda forgot...
lol I watched Finding Nemo now I keep saying DUUUUUUUUUDE.lol
Have fun at school? :P
person Magical Heather
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! I still cant believe that Ron would act this way. And too take away something that she loves and wanted so much! How does Harry not see what is going on? How do any of them not see what is going on? Cant wait to see how Draco handles what he knows. Please dont let Hermione give up Head Girl. Update soon please
person Gissel
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Plz update soon!!
person Tjay Motou
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay... the fic and plot are good.. the grammar isn't... I suggest you get a beta... or edit it yourself... it will make the flow better... and to be honest.. I like the plot you have so far... Ron being abusive and with her thinking she deserved it... there are too many women in this position and it's nice to read someone using this plot and writing it out correctly... (most get the woman's stand on this completely wrong! but you... you got it bang on!) Good Job!
person angel
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was a great chapter ... hmm ron is going to flip when he finds out that malfoy is head boy ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person Emmylovedraco
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I like it I hope to see more update's soon.
person Emma Smith
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey love the fic so far vert good I actuall have a fic thats alot like this, Any way please keep writing!
person skye
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A "classic" theme but nicely filled out. *tosses an apple to the plot bunny*
person Lux
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i thought you were against
me making ron bad
person magical Heather
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW someone needs to kick his ass. Cant wait for more!!!