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for Stolen Innocence

by xsexxandxcandyx

schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait for an update soon
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ARG! I just caught up and I love your story. The character's reactions are believable and not overly simplified. Please update soon!
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've just read this fic for the first time and I have to say I'm hooked, it's amazing it has all the tension and feeling's you could ever want in a story. I hate Ron in this and as always I want to give Pansy a good smack in the face. I love Hermione and Draco and you've portrayed them brilliantly, I know Hermione might seems to be a bit ooc as she keep's crying but she's not, I know that even the strongest of people can change as the result of physical, verbal and physcological abuse. You've captured the topic at the heart and I have to say their were tears shed in the first couple of chapters. Well done and keep up with the excellent updates. chow4now Angxxxxx
person ichiruki
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you know back at 25, after sitting here this morning reading this from start to finish, I was starting to think these two were so fucked up in the head that they'd never get to doing anything physical with each other. Esp. Hermione poor girl's a few apples short a basket from all that Ron business(which I do find it odd he's not trying to worm his way back into some control over her). But then I held off reviewing till 26, me thinks there maybe some action ahead!

Man, after Ron I still see her having a hard time going there just yet so are you going to surprise us that she jumps Draco's bones or are we going to see her work up to it? I mean this written in a way that makes me believe she's slowly been reclaiming herself so I tend to think the latter.

"those crazy kids" couldn't be more fitting a line for these two lol.
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just read your last chapter and tired to go to the next one when I noticed I couldn't! I want more! You have me hooked!
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY cute D&H yumminess! More please!~
person Cheile
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
haha good on him NOT screwing Pansy =P and i'm starting to wonder when the second shoe is gonna drop (with Ron!) (and if you can get/have Microsoft Word, it comes w built in spellcheck and grammar check :D i always use MSWord to type my fic up.)
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved it a lot!
person shebbie
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dude. I love this story!! Keep up the good work and update soon!! :D
person Eva
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! I hope you can update soon!