rate_review Reviews

I study domestic violence in grad school and you are doing a great job in dipicting a violent relationship between a man and woman. The touch with the glamour charm was very realistic. I just wonder what Malfoy will do with the information that he knows now. I wouldn't think he would torture he with it -- that would be too low even for him. I hope that he chooses to show her that she is worthy of love beyond Ron and it will give her the strength to leave him. Saying that he is drunk is a cop out considering that he emotionally abuses her when he is sober. Again, great job!

WOW!!! i hope that she doesnt back down and quit being Head Girl. I know that Malfoy wasnt doing it for pleasure by the end of it but I hope he helps her and changes just a little. But not too much

Well, I can't say when... but as soon as she comes back from her trip I'll ask her if she can beta your fic... how's that? Also I can't edit for you... but if you want I give you some tips to help you out.


Well as far as abused women go... you got hermonie dead on... and I suppose Draco didn't take the news soo well... oh well maybe he will be more useful now that he knows what's going on... lets hope.

I'm sorry to say I hate this story. Hermione is my favourite HP character; I have always seen her as heroic, and just cannot bear any story where she is depicted as a victim. I know you are actually addressing a serious social issue, but that is not what I am looking for when I read fantasy. I cannot really give any opinion about how well the story is written as I loathe the theme so much I am unable to be objective

very interesting story i look forward to how this will turn out

AMAZING! Write more

Thank you' for the new update God I just feel like kicking ron ass that what he needs an ass kicking by draco I can't wait to read more,

You know something... You did your homework on this one... yes you did... Hermonie's mind set and characterizations for this fic is amazing!!!!!!! I, myself, would offer, however I'm moving and won't have access to a computer for a long long time. However, if you email me... I maybe able to hook you up with my beta... Good Job... can't wait to read more.

I'm hooked. I MUST read more. Please update soon.

i hope the mcgonagall tell mione no that she will not tell her quite.... i hope draco can stop mione to ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

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