schedule
January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so good, update please!
schedule
January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohh... wow! good job on the spaces!! This fic looks 100% better already!! Just wow! I thought for a second that I had the wrong fic... and then I thought "WOW" Just great! and seeing Draco skip class with Hermoine... well Ron said she shouldn't be such a know-it-all... as well weird way of taking it... but it works
schedule
January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like where this is going...sorry I didn't review sooner :P I really like Draco in this story and think you do a great job of showcasing the sly part of his character, hopefully he gets to play the hero soon.
schedule
January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope Ron gets his ass kicked.
schedule
January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehe ... that was sweet is draco ... i hope she can save her and i hope harry gets a clue on how ron has been hurting her ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
angel
angel
schedule
January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well feel free to email me anytime... I won't do it over the review board... because it isn't the place for that... but again... another good chapter (minus the grammar) I like how the plot as developed soo far... and Draco's reaction is just how it should be... he reacted with both anger and disgust... but that the same time... somewhat of compassion... I love it! You have a great fic going here...
But here are some grammar points I will give you:
1) After a period but a space. Like this, this also applies for commas as well.
But here are some grammar points I will give you:
1) After a period but a space. Like this, this also applies for commas as well.
schedule
January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love this chapter girly please write more soon!
love Emma
love Emma
schedule
January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow .. now draco nows the truth ... hmm ron is kind of acting like a deatheater... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
angel
angel
schedule
January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God' draco is so bad, But I love him I can't wait for more this story is getting so good please more update's soon.
schedule
January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is so sad! I dont know why i do this to myself. Im a sucka for a angsty fic even though they make me cry. And this sure made me cry.Oh god and its a WIP - I told myself not to read WIP..i couldnt help it.This is so good. I wanna kill Ron so badly! Please update soon!