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wow .. i hope now she will let draco stand up for her and keep her safe .... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel

I can not say enough good things about this fic... I just can't! I seriously love it! sometimes it takes someone being brutally honest like Draco was for them to see the truth... and sometimes it doesn't work.... and in those cases.... bad things happen. But wonferful chapter! You've kept everyone in character but also got passed the first step in getting Hermoine out of that relationship. I only hope that you contiune to keep everyone in character because this type of thing is happeneing to real women and this is somehting people need to read... maybe then they might see the warning signs of abuse when it happens to someone they know. I love this fic, please keep writing.

Why do I have this awlful feeling that Ron is going to show up and have a big nasty fit? Or are you going to be very nice and let her not see him til breakfast at the great hall... please.......... She needs a tiny break.
Good story. waiting for more.

I know I reviewed already... but i just noticed a grammar error... you are switching back and forth between future tense, present tense and past tense...

you have (incorrect): "Draco smiled, wrapping his arms around..."

you should have: "Draco smiled and wrapped his arms around..."

smiled is past tense, wrapping is present tense... try to keep past tense with past tense and keep present tense with present tense... (same goes for future tense)

Oh wow...another wonderful update. I'm so happy that Draco go through to her. i think that Harry should be told something. Maybe if Harry knows whats been happening to Hermione she can have him as another protector. She needs all the love and suport she can get.

ARGH! When is Hermione gonna see the light, AND THEN KICK RON'S ARSE! ....we need another update!

omggg! i <3 dracoo! update sooon! ur story is sooo good!

Ok...ok. Definitely worth the wait. :) Well played Kay. Well played.
Arg...'bout time Ron had the shit beat out of him. *high five*
Can't wait for the next chapter
*squee*

Once again the characterazations are dead on!! I was thinking that when we got to this point that she would run into Malfoy's arms and leave Ron on the spot, which isn't what happens in the real world! I love this story because it's soo correct and dead on to what real life is really like! You are a God! And the Grammar is 100% Better! My god! I love it! I can not say enough good things about you and this fic!

For those of you who don't know what happens in the real world... victims of abuse like that often lash out at those who are trying to help... (however Malfoy isn't going about it the best possible way...) mostly because they don't know what else to do when confronted with the truth...

yeaaa for draco coming to save that day .. if only mione saw that as a good thing... i hope she opnes her eye soone see that draco told her the truth about ron and i think she need to see ron cheating on her to belive it ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel