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for Stolen Innocence

by xsexxandxcandyx

person Tjay
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another Great Chapter. I seriously can not say enough good things about this fic! Finally Hermonie broke up with Ron... but you just know that something bad is going to happen... Ron took it just a little to well... something is going to happen, you know it will... and I hope Draco will be there for Hermoine when she needs him. I cannot wait to read more, I'm soo glad you update up so often cuz, honey, you got me hooked... and good job with the spelling and grammar, I noticed nothing out of place... I'm impressed. I'm glad I could help! (I'm always willing to help)
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
man .. he did take that better then i thought ... she should tell harry .. i hope ron does not do something bad to her later ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person Lilum
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay Hermione for being strong! *happy dance*
But I won't be mad at Harry...I can understand why he'd take Ron's side...
Eep! Can't wait for next chapter!!
person alick
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah i gree with you. now did ron see draco or somthing ???? it just is unlike him to hold his anger now. well anyways i write stories of my own you should take a look no harry potter ones but i plan on writing some anyways you should take a look ks i would love to know what another witter thinks
person Kay_Rage
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ugh an evil cliffhanger. more please
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hopefully she fully breaks through this time and does something to help herself. I cant wait for more
person Tracy
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what a great story. it is so close 2 real life it is quite scary. as i had a friend who went through the abusive stuff so well done for getting so realisic. please keep up the brillant writing.
tracy
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the review and I love your new chapter to. Your a sweetheart update soon.

Love Emma
person Lilum
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*applause*
You did very well with portraying Hermione as an abused and battered woman. Very realistic indeed.
And was that comment about Harry becoming abusive foreshadowing a bit?? lol. *(I hope not)* Unless, of course, it's toward Ron...which isn't likely if Ron's side of the story is the only one he'll here. Hopefully though, Draco will get Hermione opened up enough and get her to voice her problems to Harry...Then both Draco and Harry can open up a case of whoop-ass on Ron! Yeah!

....wait...what? Ok, I'm done babbling now..

Who's ready for a new chapter...ME!!

Ok, seriously though, I'll shut up now.
person alice
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good story i kinda want to know what ron told him though and why not cover it up it would be simpler any ways ypu should relook over it thier was some tyeos