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Wow, a pretty good "what if" story leading from that scene in the bathroom where instead of almost killing Draco Harry ends up being kissed by Draco. So in order to remove the "death mark" on Draco's arm, Harry cut off Draco's lower forearm (i.e., below the elbow including the wrist and hand) or the whole arm or what? I was just a little unsure exact what was cut off in that last chapter as I thought the death mark was a tattoo on the upper arm. Even so, pretty emotional and tense, intertwined with a heckuva lotta sex.

I think you missed a chapter. I was reading, up to when I came across 14 and realized that I had already read that chapter. Unless it's just me, you typed 14 twice. Just thought I should let you know. But this story is great.

You are the slash Queen (or King) not sure what your gender is...but whatever. Look, I'm not into m/m slash but I keep getting hooked on your stuff so you are a skilled writer that has the ability to get to the humanity of intimacy that can touch even the most homophobe reader. LOVE this one....

Ch. 34 Oops! The chapter gets cut off partway. Is this corrected? I admit I haven't read everything; I'm just skimming because there's a lot I have to get through today.

This is the third time I've read this story. I absolutely love it!

Wow! Great job with the update. I'd always liked this one the least of the series bc it was a bit stumbly, but you've really smoothed it out and added continuity to the other parts that wasn't there so much before. Fantastic work.
Only suggestion I have is at the end of chapter 28 "Whatever it Takes", the ending always seems a bit jarring to me. They've just made up and they're back to fighting again. I don't really see the purpose of it since they both know how the other feels. anyway, love love love ~<3~<3~<3

Wow!!! This story is awesome; there's a really good story line and not to mention lots and lots of smut. I must say that I don't usually read yaoi stories where the sex roles are reversible: however this time i don't think i really mind, i guess their apperance and height make it acceptable (well harry and draco are about the same height, aren't they? So i don't think it really matters whether who tops or who bottoms). Btw, the bit about the lines from HBP puts me off since I haven't read book 6 and they like spoilers for me (but i read it anyway not to ruin the story ^^). Btw, please is there anyway that you can make draco's arm grow back???? It's just wrong: i mean draco is cute and i can't bear to see harry and draco pair any less than perfect :P *shrug; yeah i sound childish* Ja ne.

omg omg omg! I just read all of the chapters and I LOVE YOU! It was soooooo good and I actually cried a little at the end. Thank you so much! Now I'm off to read the sequel. YAY! More Harry/Draco slash. *squeals*

What an interesting tale. I notice you guys like to maim the heros in some way! haha That's not a bad thing per say, but unorthodox I guess. *shrug* I like it :) I am heading to read the next installment!

Ch - 6 I just started reading this story and I'm enjoying it so far. I will be working my way through this series a little at a time :) Thanks for sharing.