rate_review Reviews

so great!!!!!

how is it cheating

Haha... you keep these updates coming this quickly and you'll have a large group of very satisfied readers... I know they won't hate each other in the morning, but I'm wondering how they're going to handle their classes, and whether or not Harry is going to remember why he agreed to kiss(and then some) Draco in the first place. :) AWESOME chapter.... enjoyed reading it a lot. :D

Happy Writing!

Chapter 3

Uwaa... *goo*

...That was complete and utter YUM. I loved it. I'm also curious about the story beyond the sex XD so you need to update again!

This Is An A++++ WORK IT IS ABSOLUTLELY BRILIANR AND I CANT WAIT TO SEE HOW IT GOES. I HOPE DRACO CAN CONFIDE IN HARRY AND HELP EACH OTHER IN THE END.

ooh i think its quite lovely please continue!!!!

I love it !

Chapter 2

Why is Draco dying? What's going on? I'd really love to see more! Update soon?

omg its really cute and the plot is very intriguing. ill be looking for your update!

Great story so far.

A little nit pick: In chapter 2 you wrote 'He buried his face into the soft flesh of Malfoy's neck and sucked, and kissed, and nibbled. Holy fucking hell it felt so good!

Draco gasped when Harry broke the kiss, taking deep lungfuls of air and moaning when Draco started doing amazing things to his neck. One hand was buried in Harry's hair, not controlling but loving the feel of its thickness between his fingers. He couldn't believe this was really happening.'

Don't you mean: 'when HARRY started to do amazing things to his neck'?

Otherwise, I didn't find any mistake, and since I am a great nit-picker, that's saying something. I think the bathroom scene was one of the best scenes in the book, and it's great what you made of it! Please continue soon.