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for Butterfly Wings

by cameowitch

schedule December 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG I loved it omg haha
person magic neko
schedule June 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your stories and want to keep reading them. The are good and great funny gags. I don't have many writers I follow but you are one.
schedule November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this xDDD THat was so funny, and well written too.
person GGreen
schedule January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
#1 : Reviewing not so painless with the login stuff. And if we have to login can we have a reward - maybe spellcheck. I hate leaving misspelled reviews.

Lots of fun and very sensual - unusual combination - more would be great.
person koki
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey i liked it, thought it would be like
The Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe, but no it was better.
I think this ship is cute but strong, perfect.
And Sevvy, the Pervy, i didn't quite understand the butterflies bit
but just the thought had me laughing aloud.
person Extraho
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
fucking hilarious!!!!
person cecilia-weasley
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So wonderful!
person moony_lex
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*giggle* poor pervy sevy....... Lucius is hot as ever, although a bit ooc, but I don't mind that :)
The part about Lucius fighting the final battle half naked....that must've distracted a good few of the fighters on both sides....seeing Lucius fight like that....I won't try to imagine that since I'm in a public place right now and laughing is bad enough.....
Loved it.
Alex
person lucius
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok, if you say it's painless, then I shal try.
let me see...
LOVE IT!!!!!!! IT'S GREAT!!!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!!!! IS THERE MORE????? OR SOMETHING SIMILAR???????
ok, so it was painless.
person Inulover16
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic. The grammer was good. There could have been a bit more too the story, but none the less it was good. Good job!