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for Alohomora!

by pimdin

person angel
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsome i love it ..please please please please say there will be an update i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person Bella Snape
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, me thinks that Snape's an ickle bit jealous!

That was great!
person iluv2dance
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great work! I really hope we can see more from this story. I know it was a one shot and blahdi blah blah but you should really continue it. Can't wait for more!
person TiffANY
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on writing such an amazing first chapter!

I really like this story and hope you continue it

I would love to how Draco and Hermione act the morning after

And see how Snape treats them from now on

Love TiffANY : )

: D
person skye
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very fun! I second the vote for a "morning after" chappie, and maybe a jaunt into Snapes head as to how he came up with that particular "punishment"? ( I can see Him 'n Lily...)
person Adrienne
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved that! and the fact that it was pretty much all Snape's fault! I would love if you would continue and say what happens in Potions the next week or whatever. That would be awesome. Great Job!

~Adrienne
person Lexy Malfoy
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*grins* That was amazing! Great fic!

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