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February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i' sorry to say that, but could you be so nice and tell cliff, that he visits on a very unpleasant time... it's not, that i dislike him, but sometimes i think he does his visits intentional... *lol*
your story is really great, so go on fast!
vic
your story is really great, so go on fast!
vic
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February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter enjoyed reading it looking forward to next update
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February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh... I have been enjoying this one! I do hope you will give us an update soon, as I am thoroughly enjoying it! I enjoy SS/HG fics, although I have written more LM/HG, myself, so I have to admit I did enjoy the little exchange between Lucius and Hermione in the shop. Even though I know he's the bad guy in your story... I have to say I have some little hidden hope that he can be saved yet! LOL... Oh well... Good story!
Please update soon! If you ever send notice to those that like your stories that you've updated, please add me to your list...
SD
Please update soon! If you ever send notice to those that like your stories that you've updated, please add me to your list...
SD
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February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmm that is sev going to tell her ....please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now
angel
angel
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February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a place to leave the story! Evil cliff hangers! I like this story. Please don't make us wait too long to find out what he was going to tell her.
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February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is amazing,
and cliff hangers? a little mean, just a little.
can't wait for the next update!
and cliff hangers? a little mean, just a little.
can't wait for the next update!
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February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pleasssssssssse update soon.
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February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
IF you wrote a Marriage Law fanfiction with Ron and Hermione as the main characters, there WOULD be a lot of controversy!! Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger!?!? That's as controversial as one can get. Believe me, with Hermione's intelligence and Ron's over emotionalism, there is no way that mix would last. Besides, you wouldn't have the legions of Snape/Granger fans reading your story...
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February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just read your 4 chapters posted so far, and really enjoyed it, Unlike some other reviewers, I thought the flash backs added a lot to the story. I thought it let you into the characters heads to make you understand them better. I am looking forward to reading more of your story. Please update soon.
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February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Severus seems to be quite kind to her...I didn't expect that...
I wonder how does her dress look like?
update soon!
I wonder how does her dress look like?
update soon!