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for Sweet Troubled Soul Part Two

by moirasfate

person Elphaba
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is it hot in here! Wow! Fans herself! Excellent!
person Anon
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Dragonero
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good and quite interesting!!! I
person scully_m_
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*cough* Wow

That was fucking incredible, beyond hot and something pulled right out of my head. I can actually honestly say I wish I wrote this. You are a master. I am having issues breathing here and typing. I read other stories for insperation for my own when I hit serious writers block, but usaully I look at them more clinically decided what my version of Snape and Granger would do in a given situation, but this was perfect. I would not have changed a thing and it made me forget about my own fic for a moment as i reread and tried to think of a way to review that would explain how incredible this fic is to you the author. If you left it as a oneshot I would have been more then content, since it is perfect, but since you are doing more I will be anxiously awaiting your next instalment.

Again I say, WOW!

I definiately need a cold glass of water, (would prefer a shower but I am not near one at the moment.)
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was sooo hot. I can't wait for the third part. I can't wait to see who it will be...
person strangerdanger89
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love these little short stories!
I hope that there is a part 3!
I would so read it. I love this dominate hermoine without being to over bearing!
Well played
I can't wait for more of her conquest!
waiting for another chapter or part whatever you call it,

later
strangerdanger89
person Edania
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes , a DOM hermione. It rocks.
person Maria
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great smut!!! Can't wait for more...
person ccrawley
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed the first two segments and looking forward to the third especially to see what she does.