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for The Past Comes to Visit - COMPLETE

by liquidvamp

person Ann
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this story a great deal. I love the way you are painting a complete picture with words. You can feel the love and other emotions as well as the depth of the characters. I can't wait to read the next chapter every day. It's a great way to start the day off.
person l'etje
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
keep going and post soon
bye bye
person Experience My Dreams
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, it is different.I don't think I have read where they both run away.
person l'etje
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was a very very good chapter
keep going and post sooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye
person l'etje
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow this is good story i am currious what will happen in school. i hope she can make friends with the twins and child of ron
keep going and pos soon
bye bye
person SusanDara
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi there, it's Susan again writing another review of this Five Star Fic. I must commend you for the idea of kissing your true love to like coming home. Well Done!
person l'etje
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was very v ery good keep going and post soon
bye bye
person Ann
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful story. I love stories that have Draco and Ginny together. Please let Serenity go to Hogwarts, I would love to see her put Ron in his place. Not to mention what seeing her would do to Harry, knowing that Ginny is her mother and is married to Draco. Look forward to reading additional chapters.
person SusanDara
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO!!! YOU CAN"T LEAVE ME HERE!!!

You have such a great, orginal story at work. Your voice, tone, pacing, and style are amazing. What a piece I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Susan