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for The Past Comes to Visit - COMPLETE

by liquidvamp

person DarklyDevious
schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
'Oh Severus, do stop being so foul!' hehe this line cracked me up.

Excellent start - this was exactly what I was looking for. Can't wait to continue!
person zafaran
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done. You've done a brilliant job with this and I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with future stories. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters on more stories sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran{at}fastmail{dot}fm
person Leentjef
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very very very good
thank you for writing this amazing story
bye bye
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great endingg,
Veryy cute indeed.
I loved this storyy
&& I'm sad that it's over.
You did an amazingg job on itt,
Good workk.

Much Love...
XXX
Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX
person Leentjef
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very very very good and please let ron come arround
keep going and post soon
bye bye
person Leentjef
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very very very good keep going and post soon
bye bye
person Leentjef
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was wery very good
keep going and post soon
bye bye
person Leentjef
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very very good hapter
i really loved it keep going and post soon
bye bye
person Leentjef
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
post soon
bye
person Leentjef
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was very very very good keep going and post soon
bye bye