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for Birthday

by Prospera

person anya
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh lovely! This was absolutely lovely!
person ozarkmoon
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. The conversation between these two was very well done and in character. Great job!
person MsVanessa
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was.... just wonderfully written. You're an excellent writer, and they were so in character!
person Moyra
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful; I loved their less or more intoxicated state and all the confessions as well as acceptance which were possible because of it. Wonderful how he breathed her name a second time before their first kiss. Thanks a lot for writing and sharing.
person tulipsaside
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this!
person Maria
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
**Claps!** Excellent! Love the dialogue.
person skye
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful little fic of course it wasn't very "Griffindor" of her to wait for 15 years....lol... but glad it worked out!
person firewall
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sweet, really sweet. I enjoyed it.
person scully_m_
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very very well done. I loved it.
person marti
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh yay! please say there's at least one more chapter, a lemony goodness chapter???

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