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December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That made me more sick than two girls, one cup.
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November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It needs more ... fill in more details..
but keep trying .. the more you write the better you will get... believe ME (I got so many bad reviews on my stories)
but keep trying .. the more you write the better you will get... believe ME (I got so many bad reviews on my stories)
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What the F*** was that, like a really bad attempt at poetry? wow it is all i can say. your story came to me, looked interesting enough. i was wronged. yet i don't blame myself. for the author himself(herself) is the true villan. here is a huge hint...stick to a myspace blog for poetry, and leave the fanfic's to people who know how to write in complete thoughts/sentences.
~J.M.
~J.M.
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
effing trash... what the hell??? even pwp has more plot then that... seriously you need to throw this out with you old milk!
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear god.. my eyes, my eyes..
I don't think I'll ever be able to write again.. you're insane lack of talent has poisoned me.
Honestly, think it over once more.
You need descriptions, plot, grammar, spelling..
Try reading a book before posting, honestly.
I don't think I'll ever be able to write again.. you're insane lack of talent has poisoned me.
Honestly, think it over once more.
You need descriptions, plot, grammar, spelling..
Try reading a book before posting, honestly.
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know I haven't elaborated enough. I know my punctuation/grammer is bad. I'll try a different one. Sorry guys.
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This must be the worst crap that I've ever read,
and seeing that I read what I write that's something :O
and seeing that I read what I write that's something :O