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you seriously need to update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is a pretty cool idea but got a bit confusing and the chapters could have been longer. keep on with writing tho and Good Luck :)

That was great I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm not to good at the grammer part as in punctiationn but, I can help a little if you want like in the spelling and stuff but as for the sentences and things I can have my husband work on that for you. This is only if you want, just send and reply to my email telling me weather you want me to or not. Then if so send the story to my email and I will fix it for you. But like I said, it is a great story and I love it.

I like the story but you need to keep it all in one tense.... you're switching from present to past way too much... and you have some spelling errors too.

Chapters 1-2: I'm checking out this story because of the one-shot Dumbledore you wrote, "Albus Poses". Draco and Ginny as a couple is okay with me - my main interest is Lucius Malfoy (as you know). Draco must really like Ginny if he's even counted exactly how many freckles she has on her nose.

I guess working at a 'skin' magazine gets everyone worked up a lot. Hermione likes both men and women? That's something of a curveball, but also okay with me. So far everyone's indulging except Harry. Maybe in a future chapter... So, back to reading.

Chapters 3-6: Did you pattern Thomas Taylor after anyone in particular? Just wondering.

You killed off LUCIUS? Oh my, now Ill have to wear mourning clothes for the rest of your story. Sniff. How did he die? Was it painful? I'm so sad...

I'm glad Ginny was smart enough to remember to have the invisibility cloak confiscated. She seems to be interested in: 1) Alex 2) Thomas Taylor 3) Draco and that's just up through chapter 6. I guess she's not ready to settle down just yet. The photo shoot should be interesting...

Chapters 7-11:

So Lucius died in the war and his own son turned against him. Well, that's probably what will happen in Book 7 (sigh).

Wow! Can I pose? A thousand Galleons for the shoot. That's a lot of money.

Draco and Ginny were hot together. It seems as though there is more to them than just a strong physical chemistry. If it's October I assume they must wait until she graduates in June? About eight months still to go. Can they wait that long? I hope they were using a contraceptive spell of some kind.

I suppose Hermione is ahead of that game and had already protected herself - yummy, two for the price of... of...NO price. All for free! Hermione does seem to get laid quite often, doesn't she? Will Taylor pose? And will Hermione reel him in? (Oh, yeah, I think Hermione will definitely manage to get in his cowboy chaps).

And still no Harry with a partner, although he does seem to drink like a fish...

Chapters 12-16:
I did wonder about Taylor's long blond hair. Now I know. Cousin to Lucius. (Still sad, still want Lucius... Funny how everyone has favorites in the Potter books.)

Hermione, Lavender, and Ron certainly are an explosive combo. Wow! And Draco and Harry walking in on Ron and Hermione - funny. With the sizes on these guys, they should all be in their own magazine. Nope, didn't mind the foursome at all. Fabulous! FINALLY Harry gets some. And Lavender wants to date him exclusively. Sweet!

Ginny and Draco, Ginny and Taylor, Ginny and (possibly) Alex and Edward. These Gryffindor girls are unstoppable. And Edward! Eight times in one night - amazing.

And I don't mind not having smut in every chapter. I actually like to have some plot with my smut. So no worries here.

Chapters 17-23:
I'm late to this story so I know you've already done your 'senior' spread for Dumbledore in your other story. I liked it!!

Thomas is certainly buttering up Hermione. Of course, he wants in her thong. He thought he was so smart being a voyeur in the two-way mirror, but they used him instead. And everyone had a glorious time. So Stevie and Thomas will shack up for awhile, huh?

It was interesting that the Ravenclaw posers were triplets. And all split up for shooting. So they each will be represented in the magazine differently according to their different personalities. And they each were different.

Brothel bunnies all around. How generous of the Wizards and Witches magazine. I guess there are three less half-vampire virgins in the world now.

Oh I hope you finish this soon! I really like it!