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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice. ^_^ I really liked the ending. The message--friendship, trust, psychological barriers--was very moving, and set this story apart from all the other Sirius/Remus stories out there. I liked how it addressed The Incident and showed Sirius trying to win Remus' forgiveness back in an unconventional way--and the fact that Remus still refused to forgive him afterwards made him believable as a character, as well as emphasizing the seriousness of his friend's offense. Awesome.
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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent writing skills. You have a vivid descriptive voice, and the present tense really works. Thanks for this!
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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You write extremely good Remus/Sirius erotica. This was simply wonderful. No complaints here at all!