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oh i'm glad hermione will be with draco forever! love triangle and over plot can be dreaded.
but draco is less bastard,he usualy is dominant with his mate,he is a veela,not a british romeo.i undertsand u want hermione to be more independent,i just hope she wont get too smug,
also,since she is draco's mate,shouldnt she felt some sort of attraction to draco,she should suffer as well if she cant be with him,
Add some sexual tension in their realtionship,i hope there'll be some kinky stuff happen,it will be bored without dat i'm sure.

OMG!I love this story! except that last chapter..lol..i actually thought i was going to get to see his reaction to her being late, and their "first" meeting. Oh well hopefully you will update soon? PLEASE? I just have one question...does Hermione have magic? I know so far she doesn't know about all that, but I'm just curious if she turns out to actually have magic after all...Again please update soon.

But there was nothing *WAIL of saddness* and I was all excited too. Please update the chapter soon!

I'm intrigued by this story, and I'm sort of used to being a bit more lenient on grammar/spelling on AFF as opposed to other archives. That said, there is quite a lot you can do to work on those things, not least of which is finding a beta. I know that the Harry Potter section of this site has a beta forum, and if you don't have luck finding one there, I'd be glad to offer my assistance. The point is, obviously, to make your story the best it can be, and grammar and spelling play into those things a lot; working with a good beta is one of the best ways to tell a story that other people will enjoy and understand.

And if I didn't think the story had potential, I wouldn't have said anything at all.

I was very excited that you updated so soon only to realize that you didn't.

Oh well, I really like this story so please update soon.

i'm glad that u update,but i thought it would be a draco&hermione only fic,i love the whole concept draco a veela,hermione aloner girl,he save her and they live happily ever after (with lots of drama,break-up and make-up ofcorz)
now that the whole weasly and harry have involved,i dont know what to say,
i just hope u can concentrate on draco and hermione more,seing them as the main charachter,they deserve more attention,
no love triangle please..

omg i'm so excited new chapter YAY!!!!!

hey! i like ur story so much...plz continue on this i'll wait to read more! cheers!

omg omg omg omg omg! this has got to be the best i've read its im speechless and i need more, and omg ur not done, and omg this is great and omg pplleassse update . ur writing is magnificent, and wonderful, i was drawn into everything, your writing is great!

please i beg you! post the next chapter!! this is one of my fav story. i must read it until it completely finished. please dont bring hogwart or harry and ron and percy and whoever guy.. draco and hermione,thats what this site is about anyway.. ginny and blaise will be nice too