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for Night's visitor

by SecretQuill

schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh yay you updated! And while Hermione irks him now with her stubbornness the truth is, he knows he would never really be happy with a woman he could walk all over. Great update, I can't wait for more!!
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter, i would love to write more for a review but i have a paper due in a few hours...in spanish...but this chapter was great and i cant wait for u to update
person sparks
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! you need to update! I love this story so much and I constantly check it to see if it has been updated, please, please, please update!!! I can't wait to see what happens next, and I mean see b/c I can actually see the story playing out in my head.
person Lifvared
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is so cool! I started reading this story last year but you never updated, so I lost the track of it, but now that I found it again I'm going to stick with it, so update soon ok, I really like it. And thank you for making Hermione a witch, it'll be too weird if she wasn't... Update soon!
person Rammina
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good. It's original and fresh. Just one question how is black not a color?
person mariteri
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So far the story is a good one, but one thing. Why is it that you didn't use the whole word "bitch" and yet felt no compuction against using the word "prick" in whole? It seemed odd. If you feel uncomforatable using the word bitch, then don't. Use a different word. There is a world of insults out there that you can use instead without resorting to colorful language. So far so good. Keep up the good work.
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so awsome love this as usual
person linoy
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Continue!!!
i was so happy whan i saw u update!!!
i'm in LOVE with ur story!!!
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
update again soon, im very very intrieged by this story!!
person lovely4u
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cant wait to read more. I'm addicted to this story...!