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for A Turn for the Better

by Ms_Figg

person Anon
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha to Snape's reaction. Can't wait to read the rest!
person neelix
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant - nice to see Hermione with her independent streak intact!
person LustBlood
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww.... very appropriate, and as always, so satisfying. Couldn't you add just a small little epilogue? Pretty please?
person neelix
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was very tasty for a Sunday morning - I love it when its spontaneous and I certainly wasn't expaceting to find this chapter when I came here this morning! Thanks!
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
are we missing a chapter? the start of "a question and an answer" seems a little abrupt. its great. i love the appraisal and the way that snape handles his new apprentices. i look forward to reading more.
person Terrie
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, that was so sweet. I had to do the same thing. Propose, that is.
person lala
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you forgot to add in the chap 53 that you accidentally posted yesterday... the one that was supposed to be 54 but you put in as 53, instead you posted what looks to be 55
person Ms_Figg
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry everyone. I've been posting and omitting chapters the past couple of days. Off my game I guess, and the blurry vision doesn't help, but chapters 53, 54 and 55 are all there now in their proper order. Again, my apologies. :((
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY!!!! It just seems so right Hermione to do the proposing; your version is always making him do what's bst for him, even to improving his professional standards. Love it.
person Anon
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!!! wonderful