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for A Turn for the Better

by Ms_Figg

person Ms_Figg
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Meankitty: I'm relatively sure Hermione will see that Severus was a young wizard. Powerful, focused, but still a young and lonely youth, alone with a scantily dressed young witch asking a great favor of him. Besides, she agreed to "reward" him, and more than likely Snape wasn't thinking of the future beyond not being Tom's slave and whipping boy. She might be less than thrilled, but then again . . . there is that little "crush" thing going on from both sides. Heh heh.
person Muffy
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry to read you had a tough day. *hugs from a stranger* I loved the history and the clever tie-ins to canon. Thanks for the update!
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person Tenar10r
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the way this is going!
person Pianita
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dear Mrs Figg,
Thank you for the original story line you have developed so far. There is nothing like corrupting young minds that make reading so facinating....i am reminded of Dumas great book..."Count of Monte Cristo" Perhaps our dark hero is a little bitter to actually see all that life has to offer. No matter, please continue writing. I think time turning is a great vehicle for multiple adventures that character Severus deserves.
person Muffy
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving it! It was hard to read Snape slamming St. Lily but really in this universe it makes sense. That barb at the the last...ooooh you are so clever. Thanks!
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Interesting new chapter. I loved the banter between Severus and Lily. I can't wait to read more! Update soon!

Your biggest fan,
Tiffany
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So I am completely in love with story. This is so fun as an AU situation. I can't wait to read more!
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HO-LY!!! (I don't know where to stop with the exclamation points.) It seems I'm not the only one running around with a massive amount of Lily-hate. That was WICKED!!! You rock... yes, you rock... I loved the 'Mrs. Potter' thing and also the way she is all over him (well, you must have done, but don't do that, and I don't like, and blah, blah, blah)--in my opinion, just the way she seemed to be throughout what we saw of their friendship.
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
servees them right for mistreating Sev lol great stuff