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for A Turn for the Better

by Ms_Figg

schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Looks like Hermione's starting to piece everything together without Severus' help. I can't wait to see what else she pieces together.

Tiffany
person neelix
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooh... she has to see Prof Snape tonight... me too please!!!

Brilliant chapter...cant wait until she realises its not a dream!
person Pianita
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ms. Figg,
Thank you for creating an alternative universe with some justice for Severus. It serves as a great example of the impact that fairness and understanding have in the developing youth can have if given a second opportunity.
Please continue.
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great updates. I can't wait to read more! Update again and soon!

Your biggest fan,
Tiffany
person Muffy
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
She is such a know it all no matter the time line, eh? Thanks for the udpate!
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha, great chapter! :D
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know. I have a feeling that if Hermione regains all those memories, and has that conversation with Severus, that she's not going to be so happy with him and his...conduct. In fact I dare say she'd be quite disappointed in him. BUT she's in love with him...and Hermione is forgiving. Great update, I can't wait for more!!
person Muffy
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow. just wow. so bloody clever. I'm once again gobsmacked at how you tied canon with your story. Brilliant. Thanks.
person Ms_Figg
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Muffy: Thanks, but you know I follow a very dismal but compelling recipe when writing this story, one donned by the dubious red fellow himself. Mix the truth with a lie to tell a compelling story. ;) Well, maybe not THAT far, but there are so many wonderful elements in JKR's storytelling, that it would be wrong to just let them all pass out of the alternate universe, such as the passing of Snape's memories. I think the touches of familiarity help make the story interesting. And just wait, I have a LOO LOO planned for this baby. It's going to be cool, I assure you. Thanks for commenting and being supportive. This story sat around a long time and I thought people lost interest. But ya'll are out there, and I appreciate you. ***