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for A Turn for the Better

by Ms_Figg

person smoky heather
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really love this story! i have it bookmarked and everything lol. please update it soon ^^
quick question though: what the hell is a q-tip? is it the same thing as a cottonbud? just wondering.
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person Ms_Figg
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I believe a Q-tip is the same as a cottonbud if it is a little stick with cotton twisted on the ends. It's used to clean the ears much of the time, but also to apply medicine in a localized area as well. Well, you learn something new every day. Cottonbud. I like that. :)))
person Muffy
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant. I did feel a little sad for Lily, I think I have a soft spot for her... thanks for the updates!
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved Lucius' whining about being stunned, and Narcissa was right--he underestimated a Slytherin!
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh that's a lovely last couple of chapters before the end :o)
I would love it though if you updated "Through the Looking Glass" too. lol I've been waiting for that one and killing time reading this one while I wait (is that wrong of me?)
I like this one though, its cute.
Good job!
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
night for the knight!! Loved it!!

Great chapter. Glad to see you back on form!
person CB13
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My dear,

The riddle (get it??? Tom Rid - oh, never mind, of course you get it) part was a gas. If I'd laughed any harder I would have disturbed the kiddos.

I'm so glad you're letting us see where this story goes. The first bit, going back in time and chaning things, was terrific; the second bit, the Potions apprenticeship, was well-done, and you could have ended it at either of these points. I always like to have things totally explained (like Bilbo Baggins, I suppose), so I'm delighted we get to see this H/S through to.... well, gosh, I don't know where yet, do I?

Love

Christina
person Anon
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay! go snape! now....lemons :D
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwww what a sad part hun. im so happy that your dumbledore chose servus, i would of chose remus though. i also dont believe that james deserves to be head boy. he is one of the jokers/pranksters/biggest bullies in school.

btw you posted the same part in this story twice.....the dumbledore part.

liked that tom went to servus's moms funeral..and wrapped his arm around servus, thats nice lol.