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for A Turn for the Better

by Ms_Figg

schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters!
person Tenar10r
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You keep the Snapeygoodness going!
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MsFigg in her best I would say. This AU is a real fun. Please, keep writing so I could keep reading.All the best!
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was slightly confused by the opening lines. I was under the assumption that the majority of seventh years were or became 17 in that year. Hermione turns 18 during 7th year due to the fact that she has a September (and therefore, late) birthday.
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whooooaaaa -- I think someone is going to need to shag Neville. Or, that maybe Neville will have to take one for the cause, you know, to keep Luna busy and out of the way. Seems like she wants a little basilisk to herself ;)
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL. That was a hillarious chapter. I loved what Neville promised Ron. Typical guy mentality there. Thinking with their little head and not the big one. LOL.

Tiff
person Hermione_shag69
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
waw I blood like thios chapter mate!!! keep writing!!! It would be great to know the end of the story!!!!
please plase please its greeeeat!!! congratulations wow!!!!.
person Ms_Figg
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
pittwitch: "A little basilisk?" lolololol. Oh, I feel out at that one!!! :::snorts::: Oh, that's funny!!!!
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person cj
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello! Luv luv LUV the plotline here...I couldn't get enough!! I think you've managed where a lot of others have failed, to present an AU HP fanfic that reads so very believably! I'm a HUGE SSHG fan, but your intricate plotwork is truly amazing!

If you would, please let me know when you update chapters, I can't wait to see what happens in the Chamber!!

Also - I'm a huge Luna fan, and your portrayal of her is more what I thought she should be, i was disgusted at her portrayal in the OofP movie, and you've made me realize why I love her so dearly! She's got a lot going on in that head of hers...lol!

thanks again for the great story!!

cj