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for A Turn for the Better

by Ms_Figg

person Ms_Figg
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ginnylovesharry07: Hermione is remembering the past in spurts, getting details as the dreams recycle. The Pensieve Snape gave her clarified much of that night, but her own feelings haven't yet come back to her in entirety. But they will ... be assured they will. As will her relationship with Harry in more depth and more. But she's lucky in that the remembrances will most likely seem as dream memories. They won't supersede her life as it is now. That would be too tramautic. I want the story to move forward, rather than get locked into that.
person Tenar10r
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As terrific as always Ms_Figg!
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! :D
person brieb
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loved this story! great original plot! you are an incredible writer :) plz update :)
person MooMandy
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whew! I've been reading like a son of a bitch trying to get caught up on all your stories I missed awhile back! Hince the lack of reviews- so sorry! Just finished the first five chappies of this story and am loving it! Great to see you continuing on with this short story of yours; I always loved it! And extremely great to see you sailing once again on the HG/SS ship!! My shoulders are killing me, I've been sitting here far too long. Love your new work and I'll try to get caught up on this one soon! Not too easy with a 9 month old crawling around trying to eat the dog's food and otherwise destroy the house! Damn they're fast little buggers! Happy writing! Killer K
person Ms_Figg
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
BlackAsuka: You are so right. Snape was born in '61, not '60, so he would just have turned 17. I am going to have to rewrite the beginning scene and the scene where he leaves home. Thank you so much for pointing that out. ***
person Moyra
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This morning I stumbled over this story by chance. I'm very happy I gave it a try, because it's so very intriguing, and a terrific read as well. Cleverly thought out, this two time lines, and it's adorable how you changed the main charas and some circumstances, but let ohters be as they were. Looking our for the next chap!
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person pittwitch
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE LUNA! Wooot!
person pittwitch
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And, methinks she's going to get more than a LITTLE basilisk on this adventure. She seems to have set her dreamy, luminous eyes on one nervous Neville. I loved using the way she trails her hand along the walls as she traispes, just brilliant. I know SS/HG will be play slay the basilisk again, so now I'm pulling for a Neville/Luna face-off. Can ya tell?