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for A Turn for the Better

by Ms_Figg

person Muffy
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ginny and Harry usually makes me gag. I'll never be a convert but well done Miss Figg, in your universe it makes lovely sense. Ron...the prat. *snort* No sainthood for Lily and James...it works. Thanks for the update!
person wudelfin
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
like this twist with the book, right up her alley. now the hooker, she looks like a charater worth fleshing out. maybe teach mia a ting or eight
person Rainaangel
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You really are a very talented writer & i really love this story. I did like it as a one-shot but this is just so much better!! Thank you very much for writing & posting this amazing fic :)
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person Bop
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Actually, though I hate to say it, Harry was right just then. Though his life as an orphan was much more difficult and he faced many challenges, I think he turned out better for it. His parents indulgence did nothing for his character. But that's just one opinion.
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
All I have to say is OUTSTANDING. I find it rather interesting that regardless of whether his parents lived or not, Harry's life still isn't all sunshine and roses. Couple that with the fact that Ron is a bigger two-faced weasel now than in the previous timeline (which is EXTREMELY hilarious in and of itself) and I'm unable to stop reading your story over and over again. It's also very refreshing to see that Snape isn't always the bastard everyone makes him out to be. I can't wait to see exactly how Severus will finally get his witch!
person CB13
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"...he wasn't going to throw confetti." As the mother of an albeit very young daughter, I had to laugh at your description.

This is terrific. The first time-travel fic that I haven't abandoned in disgust - because usually, frankly, they're dreadful. Thank you!

Cheers

CB
person Lala
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've read a lot of your stories, but honestly, this is my favorite. I love the dynamics and the plot is very original.

schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione and Severus. Both wanting to tell the other what's in their hearts, but afraid of crossing lines that shouldn't be crossed yet. How frustrating. I can't wait to read more. Awesome story Ruth!

Your biggest fan,
Tiffany
person falconfamiliar
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
mmmmmmmm is the smell of citrus in the air?? Good god at this point id even take that fake lemony stuff you get at the GoGo Ghetto-arama