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for A Turn for the Better

by Ms_Figg

person HeavenLeighMalfoy
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I DEMAND a sequel!

This was bloody brilliant! I zoomed through it in two days (read at work, read at home) and I loved it.

I only wish that we had been able to see how the students of Hogwarts treated little Ms. Granger. Especially since she would have known the 2nd through 7th years vaguely, then when she married him, she would have known the 5th through 7th years.

Thanks for writing!

SEQUEL!!!!
person Sthenya
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for this great story. I really enjoyed it.
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Totally awsome story. I really enjoyed it.
person Muffy
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm smiling. You took your incredible one shot and grew it into a very enjoyable chaptered story. Clever, fun and even at time scary. I had a great time reading. Thanks!
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
TWO Chapters! Wonderful! I love how you created such a carefully crafted alternative to the HP universe without Voldemort throughout the entire story. It was beautifully consistent, yet completely grounded in the original. The differences in the characters' lives and motivations, now that they weren't fighting for their lives at every turn, were well thought out. You've never disappointed me yet, even if I am fairly new here.
person Ri-chan
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The end!!!....Pufff...as always the best...love it to pieces...
person Tenar10r
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SQUEEE! Great as always. :)
person Mialeen
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you know it became quite boring to wait months for another chapter that you can't even finish properly. sorry but i'm not going to read it anymore
schedule November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person susan
schedule November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was fantastic! can't wait for the next part