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for A Turn for the Better

by Ms_Figg

person Rainaangel
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww poor neville! Thank you so much for adding two chapters in quick succession - it was just what i needed to cheer me up after a horrible morning at work ;) Thanks again & please update again soon. Loves you :)
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great!Thank you soooo much for sharing this. I liked the bit when SS showed the Grangers basilisk's head. I pictured it in my head and... had to assure my sister that I didn't go mad, just read something really amusing :)
person Rainaangel
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hehe, that was so funny with the house-elves!! And what snape said was so sweet (in a snapish sort of way of course). Thank you so much for updating - loved it :)
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love all of your stories. They are great.
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SO NOT FAIR! *sigh* Ms Figg you keep me on my feet. I come home for lunch thinking I will read about the Master's Meeting, but no, the cookie is being held a little further away! I love your stories and you are a fantastic writer! Don't Stop! PLEASE!
person OliversBludger
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know, I stayed up until 2 AM reading this story last night, and I had to be awake at 6! That is how addictive you are :-)

I don't usually read this 'ship, but I really love your writing. It is completely hot without sounding forced or awkward, yet still romantic and funny at the same time! You have a great flow with your words, and I LOVE the fact that you are a grandmother!!!!

I am also VERY glad that you update often. I'm not sure I can go much longer without knowing more!
person Emma
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lovely!!!!! I just love Snape's Possesioness towards Hermione. Its sooooo pretty and beatifull. lol keep it that way till the end. so tender with love and hope. I can't wait till that stupid meeting ends!!! then Snape will get to use his slytherin "snake" u know what I mean baby!!! get the story naughty naughty mmmmmmmm update soon mua Ms_Figg !!!!
person Rainaangel
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was nice to get a glimpse of the other couples & their parents (though the bit about ron buggering lavender was a bit ewww ;)) but as always great work. Thanks for updating - can't wait to read more :)
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh so sweet. and have i told you how much i adore the way you write neville. the added self confidence and profficiency is great but the best part is that he is such a romantic. so cute.