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for A Turn for the Better

by Ms_Figg

schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far, and I am anxiously awaiting another update. :)
person Tonya
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have sooo much to say. I haven't read the new chapter yet but I discovered this story yesterday and I have been reading it nonstop. I just finished up to the new update a few hours ago. I LOVE THIS STORY! I loved how real you made their world seem, everything just seems to fit. I love how the characters that had been put on pedestals in the real books now had flaws. I just loved Hermione and Snaps connection. I am not a fan of the books themselves but more in love with the concepts, thats why I read fanfiction, I get the whole harry potter world but I get to choose was I induldge in (hermione/snap hermione/draco) being the only ones. I love you story and the moment I'm done with this chapter I'm going to look over your other stories to start reading. If you have any suggestions for me it would mean a lot.

Much Love- Tonya
person Tenar10r
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHH! You gave us a cliffie!!!!! *RAWR*

Gimme more story now!
person Muffy
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beefcake potions apprentices, hee! I have such a visual. Thanks for the update.
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol! i'm giddy with anticipation. i can't wait to find out what happens next.
person Ms_Figg
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Tonya: lol. The only suggestion I have for you is just keep an open mind. lol. Glad you're enjoying the story. :)
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Neville deserves to have an upset stomach for interupting Severus and Hermione's private moment. If he doesn't want to see it, then he should avert his eyes around Hermione.

I know that Severus wants to hold off until after the Meeting of the Masters, but jeez the waiting is intense. Damn him and his unbreakable restraint! I (as well as others, I'm certain) am dying for some lemons here Ms_Figg. But the lime was much appreciated, thanks.

The way you've got this storyline evolving is incredible. I'm eagerly anticipating your next update.
person CB13
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. Fluff? What fluff? I didn't notice any fluff.

(Ok,so a little fluff escaped...never hurt anyone, right?)

Cheers

CB
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow... i love this story... thank's for the updates! i'm realy looking foward to see severus and hermione together in this new universe!
person neelix
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Noooo wayyyy!!!

I can't believe you didnt let her persuade him into the dungeons... and that was some kiss!!

Can't wait... I'm as pent up as hermione!