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for A Turn for the Better

by Ms_Figg

schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Honestly, I was a bit disappointed by the description of the Masters Meeting. I don't know what I have expected... don't get me wrong, it was delicious but just... too little. Maybe it was because ever since you mentioned the Meeting I couldn't wait to read about it. It often happens that when you wait for something in particular, you'll find it lacking no matter how wonderful it may be- I hope it's intelligible because my eloquence in English is definitely lacking ;). Anyway, the idea of Hermione's period starting and her acting like this... that was awesome! I knew it was a bit unlike you to announce lemons that openly and I was prepared to wait longer than 'after the Meeting' but this was just lovely. Thanks for another beautiful journey to the world of ff.
Waiting for more,
Belle
person Ms_Figg
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
pytonyk: Aw, I'm sorry you were disappointed, but I didn't want to make the meeting more than one chapter. :( It would have mostly consisted of more yelling anyway, since they really couldn't do anything to her openly, though Vargas took a stab at it. :::makes face at BAAAAD pun:::

But I'm glad to see you're still enjoying the story. Thanks for commenting.***
person Lils
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*cracking up* I love Myrtle in this!! That subplot was absolutely divine!!! :D :D :D
person Lils
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol. Poor Hermione, but really...*snickering* Tarzan of the Apes...absolutely wonderful chapter!
person Rainaangel
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NO WAY!! How could you leave it there?!? Really great chapter though but please please update soon ... pretty please? :)
person LJAM
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 42, NOW I'M REALLY FRUSTRATED!! Why does Snape have to be such a gentleman????
person LJAM
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Her period?? Damn Ms Figg, that's sooooo mean. And leaving it with her dropping her robes! That's even meaner.
person Anon
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is great!
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person LJAM
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 40: I like fluff. I like it very much.
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! CLIFFHANGER :D I can't wait to see the masters' reactions to Hermione.

Great work.