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for A Turn for the Better

by Ms_Figg

person Rainaangel
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow wow wow oh please please update soon *begs* :)
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great job!! :D
person Muffy
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Again...lovely, lovely, lovely. Thanks for the update.
person Terrie
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're killing me here, you sadistic witch! I must love it though as I keep coming back for more. LOL However, there better be completion of a sexual nature in the next chapter. A woman can only take so much teasing before she spontaneously combusts! Dang, I'm so jealous of Hermione's two hour pampering! I have to share my bathroom with two men (husband and son, so mind out of the gutter) and two dogs. The dogs are the neat ones.
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah! The buildup...the waiting...where are the lemons?

Alas, I can't help but stay glued to the story, waiting for signs of impending lemonade. I am an addict and you, Ms_Figg, are my pusher. I anxiously wait daily for my fix from your brilliant mind!

Please update soon!
MHS
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an absolutely amazing story, and props to you for using Pablo Neruda; the sonnet works very well here.
person LJAM
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well Ms figg, you certainly had me going down memory lane in this chapter: my college biology lab...ick! My chemistry class, trying not to burn myself while working with acid. But the poem was definitely the ticket! Sweet memories....and now, you have to deliver the goods, whippee!!!!! Please, please, don't take long to update...we've been waiting along with Snape and Hermoine TOO LONG!!!
person Muffy
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My goodness he is so stubborn. Poor Hermione, I can't wait to find out how she further reacts. Thanks for the update!
person Muffy
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just lovely. Thank you so much.
person neelix
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Blimey... way to string it out Ms_Figg.

Hermione and I will be very happy when the next xhapter is finally posted!!!!