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for A Turn for the Better

by Ms_Figg

person Amanda
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thisis a great, thourough story. i'm looking forward to the lemons!
person artistic t
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the table was funny i coulnd stop laughing lol
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah....at long last I am all caught up. Yay me! lol But I must say it was rather cruel of you to leave us hanging....again. lol I can't wait for more!!
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I loved this chapter. :)
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You tease! You cruel, cruel woman! Buildup...nothing but buildup! As crazy as it might sound, as much as I hate the buildup, the anticipation is quite enjoyable. Makes for a right tasty lemon in the next chapter(s).

Looking forward to your next update (and the impending lemons!)

MHS
person Slytherin-Princess
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah!! this is more like it woman!! I can't wait to see what the house elves did to his bedroom!!
Much love as always!!
person LJAM
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"You will not drown. I will keep you safe in my arms, warm in my love." Gosh he's good. I'm melting already!
Could you conjure up a Snape for me???? And while you're at it, two house elves would be nice too. Can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person LJAM
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yummy! Keep going girl....
person Anon
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh... come on Ms Figg... where are the lemons???
Please update soon!